8.RP.1.1

Rebecca C's Critique 10:53 AM 5.21.12

Positive- The paper was very imformative and full of little details that made the paper more interesting. Negative- The layout went from topic to topic without putting them all together and didn't seem very personal.

Trevor W's Critique 5.21.12 11;05 AM

Positive- The article was a good source of information and i found that it was easy to follow. Negative- I didnt find anything wrong with this article.